TOEFL (Perbaikan)
2. Because they had
spent too many time considering the new contract, the student lost the
opportunity to lease the apartement.
Revise : Because they
had spent too many time considering the new contract, the student lost the
opportunity to lease the apartement
3. These televisions
are all too expensive for we to buy at this time, but perhaps we will return
leter.
Revise: These
televisions are all too expensive for us to buy at this time, but perhaps we
will return leter.
4. After she had bought
himself a new automobile, she sold her bicycle.
Revise : After she had bought herself a new
automobile, she sold her bicycle.
5. The next important
question we have to decide is when do we have to submit the proposal.
Revise : The next
important question we have to decide is when we have to submit the proposal
6. George has not
completed the assignment yet, and Mario hasn’t neither.
Revise : George has not completed the
assignment yet, and Mario has neither.
7. Jhon decide to buy in the morning a new
car, but in the afternoon he changed his mind.
Revise : Jhon decide to
buy a new car in the morning a new car but in the afternoon he changed his
mind.
8. Some of the plants in this store require
very little care, but this one needs much more sunlight than the others ones.
Revise : Some of the
plants in this store require very little care, but this one needs
much more sunlight than
the others one.
9. After George had returned to his house, he
was reading a book.
Revise : After George
returned to his house, he read a book.
10. Many theories on conserving the purity of
water has been proposed, but not one has been as widely eccepted as this one.
Revise : Many theories
on conserving the purity of water has been proposed, but no one have been as
widely eccepted as this one.
11. The food that Mark
is cooking in the kitchen is smelling delicious.
Revise : The food that
Mark’s cooking in the kitchen is smells delicious.
12. After Jhon eaten
dinner, he wrote several letters and went to bed.
Revise : After Jhon had
dinner, he wrote several letters and went to bed.
13. The manager has
finished working on the report last night, and now she will begin to write the
other proposal.
Revise : The manager
has finish on the report last night, and now she will begin to write the other
proposal.
14. Because Sam and
Michelle had done all of the work theirselves, they were unwilling to give the
result to Joan.
Revise : Because Sam
and Michelle had done all of the work themselves, they were unwilling to give
the result to Joan.
15. Daniel said that if he had to do another
homework tonight, he would not be able to attend the concert.
Revise : Daniel said that if he had to do
anymore homework tonight, he would not to attend the concert.
16. After to take the
medication, the patient became drowsy and more manageable.
Revise : After taking
the medication, the patient become drowsy and more manageable.
17. We insist on you leaving the meeting
before any further outbursts take place.
Revise : We insist on
your are leaving the meeting before any further outbursts take place
18. It has been a long
time since we have talked to Jhon, isn’t it?
Revise : It has been a long time since we have
talked to Jhon, hasn’t it?
19. Henry objects to
our buying this house without the approval of our attorney, and Jhon does so.
Revise : Henry objects to our buying this house without the approval of our attorney,
and Jhon does too.
20. Rita enjoyed to be able to meet several
members of congress during her vacation.
Revise : Rita enjoyed
being able to meet several members of congress during her vacation
21. After being
indicted for his part in a bank robbery, the reputed mobster decided find
another attorney.
Revise : After being
indicted for his part in a bank robbery, the reputed mobster decided to find
another attorney.
22. Harry’s advisor
persuaded his taking several courses which did not involve much knowledge of
mathematics.
Revise : Harry’s
advisor persuaded him to take several courses which did not involve much
knowledge of mathematics.
23. The only teacher who were required to
attend the meeting were Gorge, Betty, Jill, and me.
Revise : The only
teacher who required to attend the meeting were Gorge, Betty, Jill, and I .
24. The work performed
by these officers are not worth our paying them any longer.
Revise : The work
performed by these officers is not worth
our paying them.
25. The president went
fishing after he has finished with the conferences.
Revise : The president
went fishing after he had finished with the conferences.
26. Peter and Tom plays
tennis every afternoon with Mary and me.
Revise : Peter and Tom
play tennis every afternoon with Mary and me.
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